The sunshine falls on in

Well, the girl I like is now on talking terms with me, and I'll take any improvements I can get! So, for the remainder of the night, I feel pretty good!
Now, Wikibooks is horridly hard. It's one of those things where you don't know how hard it is until you do it. Still though, I knocked over an intro, so what the hey.

However, I looked into some writing tips/techniques/ideas. Some great sources are:
Holly Lisle
About.Com

Some of the ideas suggested were incredibly insightful, some of them are just what I've been doing all along! So, without further adieu, the insanity begins.

Rain assaulted the sky, lightening awoke the thunder in the clouds. One man stood, alone, in the rain, seeming to pay no attention to it. He was drenched, frozen to the bone, but it really didn't bother him. He didn't feel it anymore. Feel anything anymore.

Yeah, well, I kind of lost the train of that one, but hey, how cool is the intro!

I can of fell off the wagon again tonight, I spent the next 30 or so minutes reading the story tips =)

Oh well, good luck...